(Born: 1994)

What do you think this poem is about?

Suicide.

Suicide, suicide
Your presence is near
Suicide, suicide
I wish you were here
Suicide, suicide
Take me away
Suicide, suicide
Please make it today
Suicide, suicide
An answer, for me
Suicide, suicide
I need to escape, be free
Suicide, suicide
I’ve had too much
Suicide, suicide
Take me, do your touch
Suicide, suicide
Leave the rest behind
Suicide, suicide
You’re all over my mind
Suicide, suicide
Let me pass in peace
Suicide, suicide
I need to release

Submitted: Tuesday, November 10, 2009


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  • Jenna Reschenthaler (6/4/2012 8:55:00 PM)

    Lisa French, this is some of the most beautiful deepest writing i have seen on this sight.It is true the insight in this poem.....The people who say smut and trash about this really dont understand this.

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  • Kirstie Deukett (3/23/2012 12:44:00 AM)

    This is a really deep poem, your an amazing writter.....

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  • Cheyenne Newsome (2/26/2012 6:11:00 PM)

    this is how im feeling right now nothing seems to go right for me.

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  • Anthony Williams (2/25/2012 9:44:00 PM)

    Hello Lisa your poem is awesome I'd like to talk to you e mail at anthony126333@Gmail.com

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  • Nick Woodmansee (2/11/2012 1:50:00 PM)

    kitty vincent! you are the reason people kill themselves! YOU ARE THE DISGRACE TO THE HUMAN RACE! Lisa french! i know how you feel! don't listen to the lies!

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  • Kitty Vincent (1/11/2012 12:08:00 PM)

    YOUR POEM MAKING SKILLS BLOW.. PLEASE KILL YOURSELF NOW YOU ARE A DISGRACE TO THE HUMAN RACE!

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  • Kitty Vincent (1/11/2012 12:05:00 PM)

    you suck at making poems

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  • Jacquitta Knowles (12/15/2011 10:47:00 AM)

    yyyyyyyyyoooooooooooooo dat s.h.i.t. live i likes dat

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  • Adler Schroeder (8/22/2011 4:03:00 AM)

    I understand how you feel... Even I dream of suicide to take me. Many people say that the message is awful, but sometimes we all need a way to release our emotions - and sometimes that 'way' is through poems. I can feel your pain, and I hope that you will be free...

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  • Kristanna Williams (4/16/2011 7:13:00 PM)

    this poem is everything i feell....

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