Treasure Island

Brandi Vanorden

(8/12/98 / Pennsylvania)

suicide


the sparkle in my eye
died last night
i thought i could stay strong
but i just broke
i tried to hold on tight
instead i just fell
wish i could be with u in heaven
but now im stuck in hell

Submitted: Tuesday, February 11, 2014
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i dont actually think that when a person kills them self that they go to hell but i wrote this after someone told me that if my suicide tempts worked that i would go to hell

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