Jeremy Gibbs


Suicide Sad But True - Poem by Jeremy Gibbs

The voices make you blue
This is sad but true
Now suicide is waiting for you
This is sad but true
Pills seem to be the way now
This sad but true
The bottle is waiting
This is sad but true
What are you to do
This sad but true
Now you swallow all but two
This is sad but true
As your skin turns blue
This is sad but true
Your friend breathes into you
This is sad but true
How did this not work for you
This is sad but true
You just wanted to die too
This is sad but true
Maybe next time will do
This is sad but true
You pray the knife will cut you into
This is sad but true
What they have done to you
This is sad but true
Now this will have to do
This sad but true
Now it is done for you
This is but true

Jeremy


Comments about Suicide Sad But True by Jeremy Gibbs

  • Rookie lisa ritchie (12/29/2014 9:12:00 AM)

    Sad but beautiful, I love this poem (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie lisa ritchie (12/29/2014 9:11:00 AM)

    Sad but beautiful (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Zac Waugh (12/16/2013 10:28:00 PM)

    This is a really amazing poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Alice Spakrs (11/28/2012 3:01:00 PM)

    This is an amazing poem. I love it so much. I love poems like this and I'm very happy I found this one. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tessa Montross (9/22/2012 11:34:00 AM)

    i love that poem it is good i have done all this and wish that it will someday come true that is sad but true. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie William Marion (6/13/2012 11:23:00 PM)

    I feel your pain brother. Some serious work, sad but true. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Emily Drexler (3/26/2012 3:43:00 PM)

    wow. i can well relate. the only recommendation is don't say this is sad but true so many times, it takes away from the story inside the poem and its very repetitive and the eyes get easily bored. other than that fantastic[3 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 11 Points Christine Blaydes (3/14/2012 11:37:00 PM)

    This poem is almost as deep as the cuts in my wrist (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nicole Donoghue (2/15/2012 11:57:00 AM)

    very good poem i agree to this so much! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jasmine Kayleen (2/1/2012 2:05:00 PM)

    This a very good poem it is very deep... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sherri Sns (1/17/2012 3:09:00 PM)

    Some poets reach into people. But this one reaches deeper. I really like this poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jasmine Ramos (1/9/2012 9:55:00 PM)

    I really like this poem. Makes me think of Sad But True by Metallica. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Matthew Adonis (9/16/2011 4:58:00 AM)

    Lonely i stay, this is sad but true (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Raven Black (10/18/2010 3:06:00 PM)

    its better then most poems i've read. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Raven Black (10/18/2010 3:05:00 PM)

    i like it, it's much better then most poems i have read (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ifeanyi Onah (1/9/2010 3:02:00 AM)

    Thanks Jeremy, for such a wonderful remark 'the voice makes u blue'.It may sound sad and true to know that even a such condition, you have only one saviour 'HOPE' (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, October 4, 2009



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