Suicide Suspect Poem by Tiffany Wolf

Suicide Suspect

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What is it that makes me feel this way,
Is it those harsh words that you say?
I cannot face these words any longer,
They only make me weaker and not any stronger.
This harsh pain seems to never give in,
But to take my life would be an eternal sin.
Please, God, help me keep myelf in this life,
One day, I wish to be a mother and a loving wife.
But if one day I can't bare this pain anymore,
God, tell me I can come through that heavenly door.
One day I hope to walk through the pearly gates,
And get to meet all the glorified saints.
As I walk through my front yard,
I realize baring this pain is too hard.
I hate having to feel this way,
Knowing the pain will never leave, it's forever here to stay.
Now my life has come to an end,
Only God knows what's around my bend.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Christine Kerr 02 February 2009

Very well written, just remember Tiff, your at an age where your hormones are all mixed up but you are in a great place to rhyme out your feelings and that is done so beautifully

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Tyler Dee 20 January 2009

Well the peeps below me have their oppinions and sh*t of wut you should do lik um 'please don't feel that way' yah idk if you like wut they say but i dont... The poems are to express yourself they ARE some people's healing process my friends dont understand me so i come vent here. If i am right that's wut your doing? ? ? Plus showing off your mad writing skillz Great poem as always :)

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Rivers O'Donahue 20 January 2009

Great poem, but please don't feel that way. I know how horrid it is to feel such pains. It feels unbareable and keeps pushing you closer to a breaking point. I hate it and I hope you overcome this feeling. I loved the poem because I can compare it to myself in a lot of ways, but remember it's our emotions and things that happen that usually make us write and maybe one day make you famous... Keep it up... Yours Truly, Rivs

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Elena Winters 20 January 2009

living in pain is one of the worst things to come you should start the healing process good poem though

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Dark Gurl 55 20 January 2009

oh hun.. hope ur pain will heal soon lol.. nicely written luv it, , keep on the gr8 work, ,

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