Summer Breeze Poem by Rini Shibu

Summer Breeze

Rating: 5.0


The summer breeze is at my door
Shedding  leaves across the floor
Dryness is creeping into my soul
And my heart is burning as a whole
Day is long as the sun fully controls
The sweat drop starts to roll
Summer breeze don't be harsh
Softly caress with your warmth

Saturday, April 21, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: summer,sun
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Practicing Poetess 21 April 2018

A very beautiful poem, Rini! Hopefully the Summer Breeze will heed your words, and obey, and not be harsh!

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Robert Murray Smith 21 April 2018

This beautiful poem traverses the seasonal changes stylishly.

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Unnikrishnan E S 24 April 2018

Hi Rini, In the hot (and sultry in Kerala) , summer, a little breeze is most welcome. Lovely poem.

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Rini shibu 24 April 2018

Kerala it's very humid..thanks

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Lamar Cole 23 April 2018

This is a very enjoyable poem about summer breeze.

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 April 2018

Softly caress with your warmth! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Akhtar Jawad 22 April 2018

The summer breeze is now too hot, a moderate weather we all need. A nice poem.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 22 April 2018

Dear friend Rini, such a well expressed lovely poem👍👍👍

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