Summer Night Poem by ramesh rai

Summer Night

Rating: 4.5


When the life becomes dizzy
due to days toil
sweating throughout day
the day becomes perplexed
life becomes scar
vintage strew
to flourish firmament
suppliance of comfort
evocating pranksome
myosis go down
moon rises stars twinkle
then coolness of moon attire
the mystic aroma of life

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lorraine Colon 02 August 2013

A summer night is indeed beautiful. You describe it so nicely.

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David Wood 03 August 2013

Nature in the rawness of life. We have to work with nature not destroy it. And life should not always be a struggle, it has to be enjoyed. A lovely poem.

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Yasmin Khan 03 August 2013

Nature inspires us and stir imagination. Lucky are those who can clothe their emotions in words beautifully like this one.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 02 August 2013

moon rises stars twinkle On summer night. Beautiful surroundings transforming the sweltering day. Nice poem. Thank you.

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Patricia Grantham 02 August 2013

When the hot sweltering heat of the day get the best of you the night comes with its cool breezes and relaxing atmosphere then renews and invigorates the mind and soul. Nice write.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 02 August 2013

A fabulous wording poem and d mystical adds a fine flavor dat i likd readin.

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