Sun Poem by Mandy Author2

Sun

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Bright shining sun,
Lighting the world,
The world revolving around you,
My world revolving around you,
Too much sun will burn,
Leave scars,
The scars heal in time,
But not enough sun,
Can cause near irreparable damage,
That can only be fixed by the sun,
The ever burning sun,
Who outshines the moon and the stars,
Who is not always good for me,
Not always best,
But the sun is what i need to survive,
So I must deal with the burns,
Heal within the light of the sun,
To see what is beyond,
I must have the sun,
To guide the way

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Janani Jain 17 November 2013

its a grt poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! sayin grt things abt our frnd 'Sun' :) :) :)

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Angel Micheal 26 November 2012

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Brenda Schneidt 23 March 2012

i love this poem and keep up the hard work. smile smile smile

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