Sun And Distance Poem by Beyza Dut

Sun And Distance



You are the love in a buble
In a strenght of a real hassle
Of mine
With the bow hang on by a thread just goes for
the ‘love' of us
My poorness of being strong and your fear for frailty
is an endless story
Making the cosmos spread around
To open a real space for each of us
İmproving elderliness of mine while your youth growing up and up
The ‘law' of us
Making the world turn round

You and I like an earth revolution
Which keeps love of sun in your law of distance
Disappear and rise
On both endless sides of the universe
Which seems like a bow
Making it spread around
Round and round.

Tuesday, September 23, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Sometimes love seems as a ledger in so sad and fantastic way.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 20 September 2016

You and I like an earth revolution Which keeps love of sun in your law of distance..... is so nice. Enjoyed your poem.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 23 September 2014

As per the crown it says the poem is about the separation of two soul..love in a bubble- an imagery for lusty love that blast and lost the existence and the cause of blast is the protagonist of the poem..again ' Law' as a relation, My poorness of being strong and your fear for frailty, is an endless story &improving elderliness of mine while your youth growing up and up..so what I think is about the relation at old age...and now sun and distance

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