Sunday Poem by Kevin Patrick

Sunday

Rating: 3.2


Sunday is the cruelest day of the week
It stretches monotony into a cloud soaked day
seeping the inebriation of Saturdays
for the firing squad of Mondays routines
Its the waiting room of days
where joy wanders into a void
and all you have is the spitting boredom
for the appointment to the grave

Nothing happens on Sundays
theirs a staleness to the sun
and the mail never comes
and people pray at footballs church
as the day feels trapped in overtime
you can play with your friends
until you feel boredom's bends
pulling you down as your left in the lurch
feeling the daze of inertia's grime

life is one long cruel joke on sunday
times in a fishbowl, circling on repeat
fun is being murdered in a parking lot
where kids get high from the dry heat
cruising for action in a tumbleweed town
and nothing happens, not even sound


Sundays a wave, in a still-life pose
like a ghost without the holy host
and the sun never turns around
Oh sweet monday, burn it to the ground

Saturday, December 17, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: palm sunday,days
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 18 December 2022

I enjoyed so much this brilliant poem and appreciate your poetic words here.5 Stars from me. Honesty is the best policy. Great poem, Kevin.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 18 December 2022

I have read few times these best composed stanzas, with such lovely end rhymes and worded in a most thoughtful way. It has become a true honest poem about Sunday.to the poet's opinion

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Nosheen Irfan 18 December 2022

Exactly my feelings about Sundays. The sense of boredom is the strongest on holidays. I feel the same way about festive occasions too.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 17 December 2022

Kevin we're in the same boat Bravo! ! ! ! ! !

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David Wood 17 December 2022

Chin up, it could be worse you could be retired! !

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