[surrender] Poem by Frozen Beauty

[surrender]

Rating: 5.0


oh, injured soul
rest your knees
you can't chase hope
to reality
with twisted legs
plant a mine
turn a table
change your mind
now broken heart
burn a bridge
create a gap
to forget
forgive.
(12/12/08)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 14 December 2008

I'll surrender to you, even if i have to crawl..................beautiful piece with depth. Good job Amanda!

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