Surrender Poem by Marlon Janaway

Surrender



As I leafed through the pages of my local rag,
I read of a man who had taken his life.
He had left in his wake a daughter or son,
unto the care of his grieving young wife.

Laid alongside his derelict husk,
was a note to explain his surrender.
'I've been wondering blind in a dark lonely place,
I felt lost and alone and so tender.'

As he succumbed to the deaths cold embrace,
and all sign of lifes labors had drained from his face.
Like smoke from a fire, did his soul float on higher?
Where consciousness takes more advantageous a place.

The flesh conspires against spirit,
such cruel conflict, the reason's unclear.
To harden the heart to the trials of life?
Or cognize what the heart should hold dear?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Walterrean Salley 07 March 2012

Suicide. It happens all to often. A very sade tale.

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Danny Draper 27 February 2012

Well considered discussion on a very complex issue. Only the victim will ever know the extent of the problem and by then it is too late. Finding ways to encourage people to seek help for depression is surely the answer. A similar concept was considered in my poem Stolen Journey, which may be worth a read and read your thoughts.

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