Surviving The Night Poem by Bobbie Ann Pimm

Surviving The Night

Rating: 4.5


I heard a soft voice
crying in the long dark night.
Who knew it was me?

Night's blinding darkness
caresses all my senses -
And then I see TRUTH!

Sunrise emerges
through the dark storm clouds of night.
Welcome the new day!

(I wrote each of these Haiku/Senryu separately and at different times in my life. In reviewing some of my old work, I thought they all worked together as one complete poem.)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Elya Thorn 24 January 2006

I love them and the way they are combined with each other! Elya Thorn

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Byron Headrick 20 November 2005

Nicely done...appreciate the insight...the blend is bueatiful.

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Uriah Hamilton 20 November 2005

They do seem to blend in a lovely way.

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