Sweet Dreams Poem by Saminathan Subramanian V

Sweet Dreams

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I am lost in a world,
A world that doesn't exist.
I tried coming back to reality,
But I couldn't resist.

Cause it's a beautiful place,
A place with peace.
With not many people,
To break you into piece.

You create a situation,
A situation that brings joy.
As for the reality,
It's just one's own ploy.

You can pause a moment,
A moment you relish.
Not like people's mind,
Where it just vanish.

There are fewer problems,
The problems that bring pain.
But thinking about it,
There is nothing to gain.

Your mind is at peace,
A peace you deserve.
With very little things,
To make you unnerve.

With such a wild thought,
I would live every day in fantasy,
Rather than die every day in reality.

Tuesday, March 6, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: dreams,fantasy,pain,reality,thoughts,world
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 06 March 2018

Your mind is at peace, A peace you deserve. With very little things, To make you unnerve..rather than dying in reality............. it is an art to live...... it is the art of happiness inspite all that is negative in life......... you are writing a noble truth dear poet. tony

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