Fear Poem by Saminathan Subramanian V

Fear

Rating: 5.0


In a corner of the balcony,
Chin resting on my knees,
Arms tied around my legs,
My eyes endlessly staring at the moon.

Wondering how life would be in a year,
Asking myself, will these people stay,
When each has their own priorities,
They'll drift apart and I'll be all alone, I fear.

As the clock struck midnight,
Startled by a knock at the door,
I wake up from my deep thought,
Opening the door to be awestruck.

Looking at my friends,
With candles and the cake,
Plenty of reasons to celebrate,
I had a memorable day then.

Now each gone in their own paths,
I wish all of them stayed in my life,
Now gone, and are never back,
I'm left all alone, as I feared.

Silence all around me,
But I scream within,
Feeling so hollow,
Sunk in my deep thoughts.

Even after years,
These memories still haunt me,
As I huddle in the corner of the balcony.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 06 March 2018

A fine start with a nice poem, Saminathan. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lus. Thanks

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Saminathan S 06 March 2018

Thank you guys :. Really means a lot to me.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 04 March 2018

A lovely way of rendering a deep thought over spilled moments and bygone memoirs. Loved reading it. Keep writing. 10+++ for the sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 March 2018

Welcome to PoemHunter. You wake up from deep thought and feel hollow thoughts. Even after years memories remain in mind. Pain and fear move in parallel track. You have brilliantly expressed this poem...10

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Mary Skarpathiotaki 02 March 2018

Excellent! i VOTE 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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