Sweet Secret Wish! Poem by Traveler waiting for the paths to cross again

Sweet Secret Wish!

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Looking at you secretly,
to get just a glimpse of you.

Feeling uneasy when you are not around,
and not finding words when you are.

Reading your messages time and again
to analize each single word

A desire to hold your hand,
and drown in dreams.

What a sweet feeling this is,
I wish it forever and ever and ever...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 28 January 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Traveler. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Reshma Ramesh 23 November 2008

well penned.................

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James B. Earley 19 September 2008

A poignant message of unrequited love...and its painful longing!

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