The storm was so wonderful..,
so much that it made me blissful!
never know what it is like a daze,
may be as I always lived in my own cage!
was such a storm may be for me to wait,
is making me now almost straight!
a feel nothing of bad,
but something as a needy rude!
the winds were so calm,
the beginning with such a claim!
the end sure was a sweet storm,
now making it all get a reform!
Nothing can make one faster change then love if unreturned.. iip
the end sure was a sweet storm, now making it all get a reform! The storms bring destruction But you have dared to face And you have expressed wonderfully. Beautiful
Very nice that you can see beyond the ordinary ego self to the Beauty that exists unseen during everyday appearances.
poet good.........................inner and outer realm in nature
needy rude! and some other phrases were especially puzzling for me. BUT i did get that it was a poem about a storm! i'm not COMPLETELY dense/stupid. hee-hee. bri :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Blissful storm! Nice piece of work.