Greg Dills

Rookie (WurtzBurg, Germany)

sympathy


In all sincerity
It is a pathetic pity
I merely offer sympathy
With such velocity
This sadness born out of the blue
That decides to levy itself on you

In your fixed stillness
I sense your illness
Accept my sympathy

You lost a pet
Somebody made you upset
Accept my sympathy

You lost a friend
Your broken heart is yet to mend
Accept my sympathy

You were once abused
Possibly at times wrongly accused
Accept my sympathy

You marriage is on the rocks
You got divorced, left without a buck
Accept my sympathy

You lost a fortune
Your voice can’t sing a decent tune
Accept my sympathy

You lost in love or lost your job
Or perhaps at one stage got robbed
Accept my sympathy

Your life is a mess
Everything around you depresses

Whatever the circumstances
Accept my sympathy
And if I happen to show no sympathy
Please accept my sympathy!

Submitted: Tuesday, April 29, 2008

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  • Rookie Greenwolfe 1962 (9/3/2008 5:45:00 PM)

    This is really a marvelous piece of work. I really admire it. There is no guile in the writing and that must be noticed and praised. I highly recommend this and hope
    it receivs much acclaim. I shall not complain.

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