Take Me Now Take Me Fast Poem by sumeer khan

Take Me Now Take Me Fast

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Take Me Now Take Me Fast For There's Noting For Me Just Time To Past
i don't want to live anymore
there's noting for me to live for
nobody understand's me nobody like's me
i am broken i have spoken i am worth less
i am more than dirt less i'm worth less
i cant fight anymore i wont try any more
unloved and i am only i am only judged
there's noting for me in this life
i found a friend his name is knife
he told me i will never have a wife
i don't want to cut or bleed
just stab myself and die like a weed
i am hurt i am lost
i wish i was next to him cross
im lost and im sad like a dog without a lad
i want to be saved
but i cant fight for myself anymore and i know nobody is going to fight for me also
i am like a soldier field in the im just hear to feel in pain i am god please dont make me squeal
take me now take me fast for there's noting for me just time to past

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
this is about my self sumeer khan aka unreal trini magician guy
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Babatunde Aremu 15 October 2013

This poem is scaring. Why do you conclude that no one loves you. Never give up. Relax you have a lot to offer. You can become a great poet, if you persist.I look forward to read more of your poems. Read mine also

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