Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

Rookie - 3 Points (Singapore)

*** Love You Tender *** - Poem by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

Miles away…your voices drifting
Far away…your crying milling
Apocalypse now…or never
The night is still freezing
Without you sleeping…
With me…craving

Tell me to my eyes
I’ll pay for the price
Should I come over?
To live with you my lover
We tie the knot
We fill the slot
Promises are here to stay
Every second I’d pray
Between two points
We toss the coin
Head or tail
Anything will prevail
You steal my heart
Impossible to depart
I want you so bad
Thinking of you like mad
I bow to your request
To serve you at best
It’s a kind of magic
Your love is majestic
Sweet heavenly juices
You produce from luscious
I drink it all
Out of night brawl
Please return me the favor
Be my wife forever


Comments about *** Love You Tender *** by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

  • Rookie ****tamara Hanaring.****** , A Thought Mate, (6/27/2009 2:29:00 PM)

    a loving tender poem, , passionated feelings (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Dead Poettess (4/27/2009 12:48:00 PM)

    very influencial verse....keep it up.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Dolan Doran (3/6/2009 7:00:00 PM)

    nice peice...very good. the last line is..a little off, but it's a cool poem. well wrote. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Chevelle Reid (1/22/2009 11:49:00 AM)

    I Sulaiman i think that this poem is very lovely one, on the one to ten chart i would give you ten plus 10+ for such outstanding work you should post more poem to me i think your poems have me at your footsteps. Love Chevelle (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Maya Crisol (1/16/2009 4:55:00 AM)

    a great poem for proposal. cheers (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Blue Eyes (12/27/2008 5:06:00 PM)

    very nice poem that show how love can be some times confusing.not knowing what to do.i like it alot. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points Ashok Kumar (12/22/2008 6:56:00 PM)

    Good. I think the more one is affected of something, the more beautiful is the way the emotions / words / poem comeout. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Seema(Aanamika) 80 (12/18/2008 11:46:00 PM)

    I loved it.A very very romantic poem10 for this (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points Rachel The Hair Guru (12/16/2008 12:27:00 PM)

    Ahh, the long distance relationship. Loving from afar, no easy task. Stirs a mix of emotions. Very well written. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sean Hurrell (12/16/2008 9:02:00 AM)

    i love this poem it makes you think that you are the preson within the poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points Alexandra Gray (12/16/2008 4:27:00 AM)

    Aww..this is very sweet, how lucky that girl must be. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ceri Fields (12/15/2008 11:19:00 PM)

    oh this is great!
    the wanting and lust literally jumps out at you.
    veryvery romantic. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Renae Herron (12/15/2008 7:13:00 PM)

    THIS POEM IS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING! ! ..
    i truly lovvve it.It has the perfect words to go to it.This has got to be 1 of the best poems ive read on this site.KEEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Alia Suhanna (12/15/2008 7:00:00 AM)

    What a beautiful poetry! So far, this is one of the best love poem I've ever read. Its a classic! ! You're a happenin poet.I believe many women would fall for you after reading this piece.

    Love Alia. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Naidz Ladia (12/13/2008 11:17:00 PM)

    i think, ths is the 10th x i read ths poem..very romantc, very nice, , , i felt ur sweetness in ths poem hon..
    very very niccccccceeeeee..i reli like ths 1.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie LaTisha Parkinson (12/13/2008 6:31:00 PM)

    wow. seductive!
    i love it!
    it's burning with pasion, great job (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Evaughn Gray (12/13/2008 3:38:00 PM)

    wow that was so sweet, it was beautiful i loved it absolutely! it's a 10! ~Hazel G.E (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Wangui Mukiri (12/13/2008 10:44:00 AM)

    Brilliant piece, emotionally piercing. I'm totally blown over. Passionate piece (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mimi Fakhira (12/13/2008 2:07:00 AM)

    Your poem is powerful and it shines brighter than mine. This is a very creative piece of work. Please comment on my poems called My Own Sea, Self-Destroy and A Mother's Purity.10 for this poem! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Francesca Martin (12/13/2008 12:28:00 AM)

    Sweet heavenly juices
    You produce from luscious
    I drink it all

    this is very passionate and shows your longing and yearning. it expresses your distance to the closeness you desire. lovely job (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 5, 2008



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