Tangled Feelings Poem by Naliorf Oning

Tangled Feelings



Walking a straight path that lead to a crossroad.
I have reaped the seeds of which I have sowed.
A fragile mind can't take enough of this load.
My heart can't take it, it's about to explode.

Her beauty mesmerized me right from the start.
A deep longing have formed inside my heart.
Could I captivate a ethereal form? , such fine art.
Indecision to blame, The reason for my part.

Given another chance I would tell what I feel.
Never succumb to my weakness, have nerves of steel.
I didn't deliver on my promise, this time I will.
Another chance is what I ask, do I have to kneel.

Tangled feelings such a mess, such imperfection.
I made you feel hanging because of my inaction.
My promises were broken, because of my actions.
Fight or walk away, my past contemplation.

Now my decision is made I would be staying.
Hoping it's not too late and you'll be forgiving.
Laying down all my cards finally admitting.
To be by your side is what I'm always longing.

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Caloocan City
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