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She is beautiful
till the time she keeps smiling
when she opens her mouth
volcano erupts from eyes
and the beauty gets destroyed.

M. Asim Nehal

Thursday, January 28, 2016

Topic(s) of this poem: life,love

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Aarzoo Mehek 28 January 2016

hahahahaha so don't you dare mess up with her: D 10 plusssssss for voicing the truth.

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Poetic Sky 12 September 2020

Oh great. Mouth is the flood gate to.

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Darren Jkoeryo 28 May 2016

Ha ha ha..Nice humour.

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T Rajan Evol 02 February 2016

One of the best Tanka I have read so far...Hats Off Asimji.

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Kelly Kurt 28 January 2016

A perfect Tanka, Mohammed. Descriptive and emotive opening with a twist at the end. A 10

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Abhilasha Bhatt 28 January 2016

Hilarious......just loved it.....thank you for sharing :)

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