Tanka - 20 Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Tanka - 20

Rating: 5.0


life, a bubble burst
if we grow old together
will swim to the raft
wisdom is never complete
till the deepest part is touched

Tuesday, September 27, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life,wisdom
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nosheen Irfan 29 September 2016

What an insightful piece of writing. You never fail to amaze me.10+++

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Aarzoo Mehek 27 September 2016

so so so true... life and relationships are just like bubble it needs patience to to sustain it till eternity 10+

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Edward Kofi Louis 27 September 2016

If we grow old together! ! Thanks for sharing.

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