Tanka: Blessed Vision Poem by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

Tanka: Blessed Vision



unfolding clouds

reveal a patch of

robin's egg blue

streaming sunlight sparkles

in tiny rainbow droplets

Sunday, December 17, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: nature,rainbow
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Savita Tyagi 31 December 2017

Beautiful Tanka. A pleasure to read and visualize the blessed day.

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Yiyan Han 29 December 2017

Using 31 syllables in all and giving a complete picture of... Oh yes I see a blessed sky

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 21 December 2017

Wow a beautifully descriptive tanka. Reminds me of the birds eggs I used to see in our backyard years back. Kudos. Soo nice to read from u again. Pls do review comment my latest poem too, titled, saints and sinners/ordinary folks

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