Tanka - Farewell Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Tanka - Farewell

Rating: 5.0


neither sure nor knows
how to bid, smiling farewell
with the same silence
when heart is aching inside
eyes struggles to hold the tears

Wednesday, October 5, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: farewell
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
T Rajan Evol 26 July 2020

Nobody succeeded in controlling emotions nor this Tanka.

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 October 2016

This heart is aching! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Mihaela Pirjol 09 October 2016

I am saving it to my favorite's list! A perfect 10!

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Mihaela Pirjol 09 October 2016

All emotions of such situation, are compressed in this tanka...you have managed to capture these moments of emotional intensity, aptly. This is a pure, real experience: unless felt, cannot be comprehended. Amazing write!

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Akhtar Jawad 06 October 2016

Phir mujhe deedae tar yad aaya, dil jigar tishnaye faryad aaya, dum lya tha na qyamat ne hanooz, phir tera waqte safar yad aaya (Mirza Ghalib)

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M Asim Nehal 10 October 2018

Wow, Thanks Janab for this wonderful couplet by Great Mirza Ghalib....

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