Tanka; Sacred Space Poem by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

Tanka; Sacred Space

Rating: 4.5


Temple mystery

stars fall on ghostly shadows

the shrouded mountain

peeks lost in the clouds well placed

designs by the Creator

Wednesday, August 16, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: mountains,spirituality,vision
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
After the haze created by the fires burning in Canada and the local one in Chuckanut Mountain finally abated I caught a glimpse of the top of Mt Baker peeking through the shadowy clouds..that's what inspired this poem..
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 20 September 2017

Stars are amazing and they fall on ghostly shadows. Creators creation is wonderfully designed by him. Mystery of temple of hope is revealed. Beautiful spiritual vision is reflected in this nice poem...10

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Jazib Kamalvi 23 August 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Lorraine. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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