Tanka - Shipwreck Poem by Sanjukta Nag

Tanka - Shipwreck

Rating: 5.0


Broken pieces of
Cold emotions are sinking
In deep salty sea
Of my measureless blue tears,
As this heart is a shipwreck.

Saturday, October 17, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: heartbreak
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 18 October 2015

The salty sea, sinking pieces of wreck, measureless tears..... all these are such suggestive images giving a glimpse into the disturbed and violently shattered heart ! Great Tanka!

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M Asim Nehal 17 October 2015

Superb imagery and fine wording...Enjoyed it SN....10+++

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Ratnakar Mandlik 17 October 2015

Fantastic imagery and comparison. Cold emotions sinking in deep salty sea of tears while the heart is a shipwreck. Overflow of emotions too is genuine. Great write. Thanks for sharing.

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Rajnish Manga 17 October 2015

Sinking of cold emotions in deep salty sea of...... tears 'As this heart is a shipwreck'. This is indeed a wonderful poem which feels like a soft flow of morning breeze. Thanks.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 October 2015

Cold emotions are sinking in broken pieces. Very amazing sharing definitely. Cleaver and neat composition shared....10

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