Tanka ~ Silence Aftermath Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Tanka ~ Silence Aftermath

Rating: 5.0


a deafening sound
as the airplane flew away
valley of mountain
leaving behind, trail of past
with pin-drop silence around

Tuesday, August 17, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: silence,philosophical
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
LeeAnn Azzopardi 17 August 2021

it has an eerie feel to it Bravo!

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Rajan Trajan Renganathan 17 August 2021

One of the best Tanka I have read so far. Full praises.

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Deepak S S 17 August 2021

I can co-relate to many things and one being the Vally of Afghan now. Great write, Asim Sir.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 August 2021

A meaningful and poignant poem so succinctly expressed. Brilliantly crafted.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 August 2021

I concur with the comments of Poet Deepak SS. To my Poem List.

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Rebecca Navarre 21 August 2021

Very heart moving imagery and feel! .. Excellently expressed! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 18 August 2021

For the pin drop silence fullest marks dear Asim ji

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 18 August 2021

A silence after the deafening sound like a silence after the storm...says it all!

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Poetic Sky 18 August 2021

Yes very true, like after storm the complete silence.

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S H 18 August 2021

Yes the perfect aftermath scene, Great imageries.

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