Tanka With Pale Sun Poem by Paul Hartal

Tanka With Pale Sun



A pale sun glimmers
In the downbeat silver sky,
An orange-disc poem,
Swimming between flimsy clouds.
My cheery heart: a ladder.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This verse follows the matrix of the Tanka, a genre of Japanese poetry. The word tanka means "short song". Tanka has a pattern of five lines constructed from 31 phonetic sound units, called ‘on-s'. An on can correspond, but does not necessarily equate to a syllable. The sound units are structured in the five lines this way: 5-7-5-7-7. The modern tanka developed from the classical Japanese romantic song of the waka. Its roots date back to the Heian period,794-1185. The Japanese poet and essayist Masaoka Shiki (1867-1902) developed the tanka and the haiku as modern forms of classical Japanese literature.
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