Tears Poem by rachel reed

Tears

Rating: 4.5


her tears come down,
and no one understands
she wont talk
she wont move
she just wants to disapear
her tears flow out
her wrists turn red
but nobody knows
these will be her last tears

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dee Daffodil 26 February 2007

I notice that you wrote this one in the third party...and I wonder why you feel that you need that emotional distance? Nicely done...If this is you...I would encourage to to write, rather than slash. Hugs, Dee

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Carissa Thiessen 02 February 2007

Very powerful words. I hope they aren't your last. I look forward to reading more from you.

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Carrie Salazar 02 February 2007

i really like this it says alot carrie

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