Tears Of Love Poem by Elena Sandu

Tears Of Love



Would you quit
rubbing love
to your heart?
Better
rub onion
to the eyes!
It has the same effect
of giving cries
Only, for shorter
period of times.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wabi Sabi 08 August 2012

quite interesting! don't wake sleeping babies by rubbing either. I just got one too. I enjoyed! thanks a lot!

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Hamid Negah 08 August 2012

excellent, short poem more interesting, i loved it.

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Kelly Seale 08 August 2012

Elena, I love your analogy! Your words flow so easy, yet stick to my lips like honey. Great write! -Kelly.

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Saadat Tahir 08 August 2012

Ah you almost thumb your nose at the cupids bow... catch me if you can self sustaining and confident lines cheers

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Rupika Alekhya 21 August 2012

Precise and effective

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JOY OGOR 30 May 2019

LOVE IT

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Dr.subhendu Kar 05 October 2012

heart burns brilliant being inflamed by love yet eyes looks red by tears losing love, .............................interesting write 10++.thanks for sharing

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Poetheart Morgan 23 September 2012

yes, must deserves it! ! ! ! Onion? ? ? ? Great like always! ! ! !

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Eindaray Kyaw 21 September 2012

I enjoy this cutie poem especially the word... rub onion...so great! !

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Nader Baheri 14 September 2012

wonderful it reminds me one of Ozzy Osbourne's song named No More Tears. Mucho gracias meansm

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