Would you quit
rubbing love
to your heart?
Better
rub onion
to the eyes!
It has the same effect
of giving cries
Only, for shorter
period of times.
Elena, I love your analogy! Your words flow so easy, yet stick to my lips like honey. Great write! -Kelly.
Ah you almost thumb your nose at the cupids bow... catch me if you can self sustaining and confident lines cheers
heart burns brilliant being inflamed by love yet eyes looks red by tears losing love, .............................interesting write 10++.thanks for sharing
yes, must deserves it! ! ! ! Onion? ? ? ? Great like always! ! ! !
I enjoy this cutie poem especially the word... rub onion...so great! !
wonderful it reminds me one of Ozzy Osbourne's song named No More Tears. Mucho gracias meansm
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
quite interesting! don't wake sleeping babies by rubbing either. I just got one too. I enjoyed! thanks a lot!