Come with me my love.
Let us climb the rainbow
till we reach the top of the bow.
Shall we sit there hanging our legs
and talk little things and laugh?
Tell me of your dreams
my love.
Let me smile with you.
being one with you
in your smile and in your tears.
the poem is filled with serenity.... love is dripping from the lines. thank you
There is serenity in this poem, its soft and gentle flow is lovely.
Smiling together, sitting together and climbing to rainbow together enlighten the candle of pure love. A beautiful poem on love and life brilliantly penned.10
Innocent and enchanting too. Pure love. Imagine that... sitting on a rainbow with your legs dangling........ loved this one..
Let me smile with you. being one with you in your smile and in your tears. such a wonderful imagination and desire. thank you
This is a beautiful image painted with words. Very serene, lovely. Thanks for sharing!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
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Tony, you have painted a beautiful picture of your love, so wonderfully innocent and pure, child-like simplicity that can be seen. I can totally see you sitting atop the rainbow with your legs dangling over, talking to your love about your shared dreams in life. A soothing picture of loss beneath the smiles and tears. Tenderly and delicately touched my heart with your unconditional love that you've given to someone you loved dearly. Amazing beauty of true love stands out in this poem. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn
Thank you Roseann God bless you