Tell Me You Love Me Poem by Dannielle Smedley

Tell Me You Love Me

Rating: 3.5


My heart is on the floor
I cannot feel a single thing
No more.

Just tell me you love me,
Because when I'm with you,
I feel as if I'm lost at sea.

Take my hand,
And we'll run away,
To a magical place,
Another land.

Please give me a reason to be here,
Hold me tight,
And wipe away my tears.

There's a sore inside my soul,
I feel so alone,
I feel so cold.

I love you more than there are stars in the sky,
And fish in the ocean,
Never say good bye,
I promise to give you the world's devotion.

Just give me one chance,
Because I've loved you ever since we met,
Ever since
The very first glance.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Emily Logan 11 June 2015

This is how I feel about my BF in Canberra

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Khairul Ahsan 18 August 2013

Yes, love needs a lot of telling.

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Dannielle Smedley 18 August 2013

Thank you, @Tiku and Mohabeer Beeharry, your words are so kind.

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Anil Kumar Panda 18 August 2013

the intensity of feeling of love for him is beautifully penned down here.very noce.keep inking.

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Mohabeer Beeharry 18 August 2013

Who is you? If it God, he will never let you down If it is someone, well I don't know. But be happy.giveyourself a lift up. Poem is full of subtle emotion.lovely Mohabeer Beeharry You could read my poems sometimes

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