Alone in the darkness my true fate lies
Where evil rules and hatred never dies
The trick he uses is sweet temptation
But the price to pay is eternal damnation
He gave me the venom and gave me the knife
And he told me to end my once wretched life
Evy, this is a wonderful...me and you have alot in common...keep on writing....
Another cool poem if i may say so myself ;) 'Alone in the darkness my true fate lies where evil rules and hatred never dies' I can see you think similar to me ...And you know what they say.......... Great minds think alike
Fantastic lines... the venom.. evil rules and heatred never dies..... such deep from so few words.
He gave me the venom and gave me the knife, great line..............
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Get thee behind me Satan...and push.... You certainly have a way with words, this one is dark and moody. Seems to be a common theme here. Dee