A journey started with full vigor
There on the way eclipsed it by someone
Its randomness rest on the way
But its shine never stalls for all-time
Darkness fumigates in that sector
But there twinkles some hope
His hidden glow was then empty
Though there glitters a narrow beam on the lane
It's leisurely all the way
Dreams contracts to self
There darkness speaks in contrast
There even shadows are invisible
Its a tenebrous night with no moon
Though the fathom is indistinct
Stars there twinkle as inane
But the marvel wide radiance on the sky
It's the ray that stretch a strand
Though the hope is seize by mourn
Still there twinkles hope in life
And will succeed in a moonlit night! ! ! ! !
©2014 SALINI.S.NAIR. All rights reserved.
there may be some stars twinkling even in tenebrous night..likewise there may be something to hope even in sadness
Mourning comes in journey but that can't thwart the ongoing till the destination is reached.......It's the truth of life.............Insightful and very well composed
Still there twinkles hope in life And will succeed in a moonlit night! ! ! ! ! Hopes and dreams keep us alive. A nice poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Thoughtful and positive poem. Beautiful lines says it all.... Though the hope is seize by mourn Still there twinkles hope in life And will succeed in a moonlit night! ! ! ! ! Very true said, Salini. There is hope even in mourn, which keep us moving in life...Loved reading it.