Thank You... Poem by Pranav Kumar

Thank You...

Rating: 5.0


Now I think
how much you care
Cuz when I tried to blink
back my tear,
you gave me a hug
and a warm coffee mug.

When anything went wrong,
you always came along
and made me forget,
why I was upset.

You filled my life
with colors so bright
and happiness I cannot tell
just like an angel.

Now that you are away
I try to walk back
and remember a day
when I held your hand
or showed you the way,
but not a sight...

And now I desperately wish
I had not been so selfish
And you dont have a clue
How much I want to Thank you...

PranavKumar
13/8/09

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dream Catcher 13 August 2009

Great! ! so touching! ! This is your best poem so far.

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C. P. Sharma 13 August 2009

Too mature for your age. CP

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Indira Babbellapati 13 August 2009

wonder if u r a ten yr old!

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Ted M 13 August 2009

Where does this come from?

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Nikunj Sharma 13 August 2009

You are a wonderfully smart and honest kid.........very gud poem....

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Rajaram Ramachandran 04 October 2009

With all heartfelt feelings a word of thanks is expressed at the end.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 October 2009

And now I desperately wish I had not been so selfish And you dont have a clue How much I want to Thank you....at least oneshould not be ungrateful inlife and forget telling thank you..lovley poem of your age...10 read mine kids.....school....smiley....no teacher please..henlaid an eggs

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Patrick A. Martin 14 August 2009

Pranav being a poet is in the heart - you are a poet indeed

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 14 August 2009

true as all have said..there is tremendous depth and maturity in this poem

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 14 August 2009

Good work Pranav.............Thanks for sharing.................Thank You..............

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