Now I think
how much you care
Cuz when I tried to blink
back my tear,
you gave me a hug
and a warm coffee mug.
When anything went wrong,
you always came along
and made me forget,
why I was upset.
You filled my life
with colors so bright
and happiness I cannot tell
just like an angel.
Now that you are away
I try to walk back
and remember a day
when I held your hand
or showed you the way,
but not a sight...
And now I desperately wish
I had not been so selfish
And you dont have a clue
How much I want to Thank you...
PranavKumar
13/8/09
You are a wonderfully smart and honest kid.........very gud poem....
With all heartfelt feelings a word of thanks is expressed at the end.
And now I desperately wish I had not been so selfish And you dont have a clue How much I want to Thank you....at least oneshould not be ungrateful inlife and forget telling thank you..lovley poem of your age...10 read mine kids.....school....smiley....no teacher please..henlaid an eggs
Pranav being a poet is in the heart - you are a poet indeed
true as all have said..there is tremendous depth and maturity in this poem
Good work Pranav.............Thanks for sharing.................Thank You..............
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Great! ! so touching! ! This is your best poem so far.