What Do I Want? Poem by Pranav Kumar

You ve got a lot of talent...

Yes, you can get everything u want but without satisfaction, u have nothing. Nice piece of work.

Dear Pranav, Good idea.The last word of the poem is the crux of the problem. Without satisfaction all are useless. Hope you get all and satisfy yourself Thanks Rajkumar-7

nice expression of what you want in life... you need things, treasures? that's ambition.. and that's good...you're focused... need satisfaction? then Love....and find God love can make everyone felt satisfied... because Love is God and God is Love... nicely written, Pranav...very honest and with innocence 10+++....

Satisfaction is a difficult thing to get when wants are more and more.

if you want bmw you have to study right from now. good ambition.nice poem voted10 surya

When you will find satisfaction all other things would appear superfluous.........Jaab ave santoshdhan saab dhaan dhuri saaman..........Good Write....10+++

do keep track of all u want, dear lil pranav and one day u've them all with u!

Yes, Paranav, - as you keep getting older you will realise, that true inner peace is not based on material things! You may also start to wonder as to why - those Munis & Rishis since those days of old, left everything to meditate, what did they gain or what did they lose? The answer to this - you ALONE must find! -Raj Nandy