That Man Poem by qin xing

That Man

Rating: 4.0


That man's eyes as deep Ocean

I try repeatedly to where to find the treasure

Infinite love hidden in the fundus

As erupting of the volcano to release the heat energy


Young life will be lose on the battlefield at any time

He rarely express his sadness and fear

My heart is grabbed by his courge

Let him to be my lover

That is the gift of God to give me

Let him to be my husband

It will be the happiness of my life


corrected by Tak:

That man's eyes are as deep as the Ocean
I try repeatedly to find the location of the treasure
Infinite love hidden in the vision.
As the erupting volcanoes release the heat energy

Young lives will be lost on the battlefields at any time
He rarely expresses his sadness and fear
My heart is grabbed by his courage
Let him be my lover
That is the gift of God has given me
Let him be my husband
It will be the happiest day of my life

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
a soldier on the battlefield.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Donnie Wolff 25 August 2014

I hope that works out.. Hope... Having faith in the future

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