The Angst Poem by Aaryaa Kamdar

The Angst

Rating: 5.0


Some say when the night goes cold;
The phantom descends the creaky staircase;
And ambles around the labyrinths of grubby corridors;
In desperate search for the Gates Of Paradise;
The only key is Sacrifice…

Despite the immense revulsion by commoners;
Despite feeling like a bird captured in a cage;
Despite of having only the brain of a mouse to nimble on;
Despite the feeling of capsizing himself under the dark waters;
The Phantom survives…

Unable to extricate from the grasps of the Grubby corridors;
Unable to reinforce the liveliness within him;
Unable to uncover the dark secrets of his only obstacle;
Unable to unite with the Gates Of Paradise;
The Phantom Survives…

Disguising himself as a heartless soul;
There still remains a heart deep down;
Persistently contemplating on the sacrifices he could make;
Not realizing that it lay right in front of his eyes:
His own dead body…

- By Aaryaa and Ananya

Wednesday, June 29, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: death
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is about people who are physically alive but mentally dead. Many people feel lost, but they put on a brave face in front of others... This is a poem about these people.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 29 June 2016

An insightful piece of poetry, well articulated and elegantly penned in heighten diction with conviction. Beautiful depiction of stagnation, loss of hope, and deplorable condition of life at its lowest ebb. Thanks for sharing Aaryaa. Please read my poem POETIC MASTERPIECE.

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Soul Watcher 29 June 2016

Wow, splendor. thanks for sharing

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