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hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 19,419 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

The Beauty Itself


Veiled beauty I admire
Let it remain blessed
It might have descended on earth
To be remembered till our death

I am the one
So far having seen none
Yet think about veiled beauty
Thank of nice part played by the almighty

Roses remind me of great natural show
Its fragrance spreads all over and grows
The garden is housed of different flowers
All have come up with rainy showers

All eyes make desperate bid and thrust
On simple object with full crush
How many succeed is anybody's guess
But it needs careful approach and access

Generally its is outer glow
That makes magnificent show
Only eyes speak with no language barrier
It is enough for person to bet on her

Not that we are simply blind
Have no sympathy of any kind
But it has magic pull
We are made sometimes perfectly fool

I won't dwell much on negative side
There is no opinion divide
We are for perseverance of beauty
Whether that is seen in jungle, desert village or city

You can speculate about nature
You can also dream about future
But not to have any control to secure
Then she may politely turn down an offer

I have lot more to write
About perception behind those eyes
Not because some communities take in pride
For keeping them under veil and hide

I for one shall prefer open eyes too
It remains same and literally true
But more you hide then eagerness grows
The beauty itself speaks well and shows

Submitted: Tuesday, March 19, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, March 19, 2013

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  • Gold Star - 19,419 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/19/2013 8:10:00 PM)

    Like · · Unfollow Post · 10 hours ago
    Sanjay Kurmi and 3 others like this.

    Vicky Singh i love those eyes
    10 hours ago · Unlike · 1

    rohit, mukesh n vicy welcome
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  • Gold Star - 19,419 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/19/2013 7:50:00 PM)

    Ram Nath likes this.

    Ram Nath Lazwab Lazwab.......Guruvar.......//I claimed on many occasion
    That there was absolutely no confusion
    I was to wed a person of my choice
    That was the only way to fulfill promise
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  • Gold Star - 19,419 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/19/2013 7:49:00 PM)

    Ram Nath likes this.

    Ram Nath Lazwab Lazwab Guruvar.....Aha.........Kya Kahne..........Generally its is outer glow
    That makes magnificent show
    Only eyes speak with no language barrier
    It is enough for person to bet on her
    7 hours ago · Unlike · 1 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,419 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/19/2013 7:28:00 PM)

    Author Kesha Finesse Murphy and 3 others like this.

    Author Kesha Finesse Murphy Love your work King
    10 hours ago via mobile · Unlike · 1

    Kendoc Kendoc beautiful
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  • Gold Star - 19,419 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/19/2013 7:26:00 PM)

    Heather Burns good write about the veiled beauty. lovely pic.
    8 hours ago · Unlike · 1

    Marieta Maglas good poem, nice pic
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  • Gold Star - 19,419 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/19/2013 7:19:00 PM)

    George T. Everette Hidden beauty does have an appeal that can't be equaled.
    3 hours ago · Like · 1

    Jen Walls Deeply intriguing beauty revolves around the inner soul...an excellent write dear Hasmukh
    2 hours ago · Like

    Rhea Tathagata The veil makes the eyes more beautiful and enhances the intrigue of man...mystery always appeals man to quest for the truth...in a way search for the soul...nice thought...
    about an hour ago · Like · 1 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,419 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/19/2013 6:09:00 AM)

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    FABULOUS

    Lilly/Judy Emery4 hours ago
    :)
    Comment +1
    great imagery


    Charles Lum4 hours ago
    I really like the use of imagery in your poem
    Comment +1
    a poem of adored (Report) Reply

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