The Coming Of Dusk. Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan
The Coming Of Dusk.
The green backdoor
has some alien colors more
rather yellow-greyish-blue
as the galaxy sometimes shows you
through its sunrays on the backdoor too
tender thrilling movements
at the gateway of the dusky pavements
swaying softly in the wind
warmth spreading caressing my skin
the galaxy is drifting nearer
so many colors it represents
the yellow-greyish-blue becomes clearer
not three nor seven but one loveliest colors'blend
the ardent air has spread now its foreign accent
golden sun rays are creeping into a dusky draw
and have turned the warm coolness of the day somehow
into falling dusk and fading greenish-grey
the rustling leaves in the backyard's shade
waving-whirling cool like summer's soulmate
the sun is heading for a darker destination
as soonest the warm cozy coolness of the day
would be swallowed by the ardent air's foreign accent
the wealthy warmth will then go astray
and cool breeze will be blowing in, evening is present.
Photography by Sylvia Frances Chan titled "The Coming Of Dusk"
© Sylvia Frances Chan
Dutch Poetess
AD. Monday the 9th of July 2018
@ 20.38 hrs. P.M. West-European Time
as the photograph has the same title.
Both are created/done by Sylvia Frances Chan
AD. Monday the 9th of Juli 2018
@ 20.38 hrs. P.M. West-European Time
A marvelous nature write. It vividly and beautifully depicted how the dusk takes a full grasp of the day. The poetess brilliant description of the changing colors is amazing. Loved reading this magnificent piece of work. One of your best, Sylvia. 10++++and onto my Poem List.
P.S. I do agree with all you wrote here. So nice in emotions to experience the joyful experience of a lady who can appreciate poetry that is thoughtfully built up. I do realize just now how indeed fascinating this is and that you said One of my best. I immediately believe you, Mrs. Juan-Austin!
Thank you so much for your ardent comments and precious compliments, Mrs. Juan-Austin. I feel humbled and honoured realizing that you like this poem a very lot. Your words are mesmerizing and once again thank you for your heartwarming words. Thank you too for the 10++++.
Thank you for your precious visit and kindest comments. From your response I know that you like the poem. Thank you and also for the ++10, Robert. Your words most appreciated.
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We notice from very tender movements that The green back door has more extraterrestrial colors. Colours attract attention of people like us. Golden sunbeams sneak in a dim draw and gladly dusk motivates sky and creatures with clear blue colour. Coolness of the day is felt from the breeze. A complete and interesting imagery is drawn in this excellently penned poem about dusk Cover photo is pretty one..10
Thank you so much Master Poet Kumarmani Mahakul Sir for your precious responses. Yes, I like very much this cover photograph. Thank you a myriad for the 10 and your valuable words about this poem.Yes, the green back door has more extraterrestrial colors. Absolutely. Once again: Thank YOU Sir!
Thank you so much Madster Poet Kumarmani Mahakul Sir for your constant loyal support. God's Blessings! And for the precious 10