The Crippled War Hero And The Spider Poem by Not Long Left

The Crippled War Hero And The Spider



It spun another web
above my shell shocked head
I hit it with my artificial leg
down it fell motionless, dead.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brian Jani 14 July 2014

interesting poem with a sad sentimental endings.well penned though.

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Ernestine Northover 14 July 2006

You should have had more compassion. Poor spider, what a sad ending. Perhaps you didn't want a 'web site' above your head, He would have been better 'legging it'. Love Ernestine XXX

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