Two times a better thought than forlorn
to accept defeat is a great difficulty
an upsurge of dreams that cannot be forsaken
an emotion that brings back memories
wonder at the height of success
a greater meaning that could take
victory to behold and worship
because some can never accept defeat.
the intellectual thoughts that are our own, a perception
the action taken, a condition of natural thoughts
to listen in fearfulness, a lesson of another goal
as natural thoughts overflow with imagery
the success already achieved, to work more
the grace of god and grandeur, a job commitment
wash the ink and tear the paper
the respect, a simple wardrobe, a lungi'
once upon a time, the host
to a poet the importance of others imagination.
to his poem, a noble cause.
a poet is an orphan in his thoughts.
society, society; a new poet is born.
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I would like to translate this poem
Your ideas are good, yet your sentences run together too much. In the first stanza I can make three sentences that make sense to the one that is written. Thoughts are hurriedly rushed together with no pauses to reflect on what you're saying. Otherwise, this poem is very good with meaning. Like what you're saying. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn