The Dense Fog Of Nothing. Poem by Sandra Feldman

The Dense Fog Of Nothing.

Rating: 5.0


As the world turns
So do our lives,
And yet, so very much
Is out of our control
So many things
We know
Should change,
And yet,
They're passed by,
Because they don't
Produce, the necessary
Votes, that are
So cherished by
The greedy,
And incompetent
Creatures,
Just standing by,
I could say more
But, what for?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nabakishore Dash 11 June 2023

Perhaps the greedy incompetent people are the wrong political people.Nice piece.

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David Wood 11 June 2023

I agree with Rose Marie. My country is festering under the delusional influences of inept leaders emotionally and morally bankrupt. Keep +ive though.

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D.N. Rebb 11 June 2023

And the dense fog keeps getting thicker (this is a great poem; truly love it)

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Jayne Louise Davies 11 June 2023

How very true Sandra. Top marks *****

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 10 June 2023

A very keen observation. So sad but true and it breeds demoralization in our society. I hope those who have been bestowed with power must perform their jobs to the best of their ability and with honesty.

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