The Depressed... Poem by Naila Rais

The Depressed...

Rating: 5.0


Walls squeezing, voice cracking
And the inner soul screams
The screams that no one hear
The pain no one can bear....

Saturday, August 11, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: alone,depression
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shakil Ahmed 11 August 2018

Add a comment.simply wonderful, thanks for sharing

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Dr Antony Theodore 30 January 2019

the inner soul screams.so true in depressive mental state the inner soul screams.... the effect of which is seen even on the body. thank u. tony

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Baquee Billah Ahmed 29 August 2018

every pain is important to differentiate healthy body from the painful body....If we dont have the pain we can not have the sense of healthy body...Good luck, , , , nice line

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Baquee Billah Ahmed 29 August 2018

U are welcome

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Naila Rais 29 August 2018

Thank u........... Yah, it creates empathy.... Naila

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Dheeraj 26 August 2018

It's a harsh truth in the mid of depression! (10++++) . But a hope is always there, might be feeble in the room of darkness. Once we imagine the thought of peace, the inner cry slows down and we wake eternally to the world of peace!

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Naila Rais 26 August 2018

Kkk....thnx for your spiritual words.. Naila

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Kostas Lagos 11 August 2018

A dark, well written poem, suitable for describing depression.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 August 2018

A vivid portrayal of depression. Great brevity.10++

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