The Early Bird Felt Ill Poem by Juan Olivarez

The Early Bird Felt Ill

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The early bird felt ill today,
Which really was not the norm.
He couldn't fly, and he couldn't sing,
And he couldn't get the worm.

1/14/14
ALTON TEXAS.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Smoky Hoss 26 February 2014

I must agree with Jessica below, in a few short words you have spoke deeply into the human soul, with it's brokeness and hurts.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 29 January 2014

I feel the pang, when it comes to that.

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Valerie Dohren 18 January 2014

Ha, oh poor little birdie! Nice one Juan.

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