The Final And Fresh Sun Poem by Mohammad Muzzammil

The Final And Fresh Sun



The sun calls back of its rays,
And ready to go far behind,
Birds and cattle are on their ways,
To reach their home before day truns blind.
The sea is calm and fish on rest,
And cold winds from the west,
Passing through every mount, forest and valley,
A spirited and melodious voice I hear,
Wishing us warmly Keats and Shelley,
Of coming a lively and happy new year.

The breezy blows and breaks the day,
In the foggy morn the sun does shine,
The pearls are lying on greenw clay,
That really invites a revolt wine.
Make much efforts and less endure,
Hope to raise and fear not to feline,
Then wait for help from the Azure,
And joys'll wait for thee in single line,
Singing it the wind moves everywhere,
And says to whole creation a happy new year.

(01.01.2008)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brian Jani 13 May 2014

Muhammad You nailed this piece of poetry

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Elena Sandu 01 November 2011

This is a beautiful written poem, enjoyed the ride, thank you for share.

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Ata Ata 20 December 2010

The beautiful picture of sun, so rich in vocabulary that let me feel this poem so deeply.

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Amy Marie 19 December 2010

Pretty good poem :) I like that it's about the sun setting.

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 27 October 2010

Captivating, enthralling, enchantin- All adjectives are suitable for the poem. Well composed.

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