The First Poem by drich suarez

The First

Rating: 4.7


There was a day
I remember
It was somewhere in September
I opened my eyes
in a broad day light
and found myself in a grassy land
I scattered my eyes
and began wondering
"Where I could be? "
My curiosity led me unto walk
and in a distance not so far away
I saw that grasses swayed
A maiden there appeared!
A very innocent woman
I described
I remember her singing a song
I remember her touching every
grass she passed by
I remember her smiles
I remember it all
The world froze for a moment
when she finally got neared at me
I heard her saying my name
as she crossed her hands onto my nape
I felt something strange
There was a sudden pinch of happiness
that revived my heart
I couldn't get on myself that moment
I was about to explode!
She noticed the awkwardness in my face
so she helped me put my hands
pirouetting 'round her waist
"You're so thin"
I said
The words slipped just like my
breath
The shy me parted for awhile
And so we wasted no time
I moved my face a little downward
and hers a little upward
Our heartbeats doubled
Our intent became apparent
Nobody's feeling could deny
"A point of no return"
I said
Only an inch gap left between our lips
Slowly and slowly I moved
then my lips gently perched onto hers
She smiled
I smiled
and we called that one
the first.

Wednesday, February 28, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: happy,imagination,joy,love,love and art,romance
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 02 March 2018

This is indeed an amazing poem having the ending of a fairy tale. Sweet and captivating narrative. A maiden there appeared! .... A very innocent woman The world froze for a moment.... Our heartbeats doubled

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Bernard F. Asuncion 01 March 2018

Drich, such a lovely write...10+++++

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