The Forbidden Fruit Poem by Bonnie Collins

The Forbidden Fruit

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Borrowed moments borrowed time
sifted through a mill of agony

LIfelessly and through the gates
of eden, you graciously invited
me to share with you a fruit of love

Excepting your invatation oblivious
to the realization that would occur

Living in exhile, wondering through
many ellusive moments of deception

Trying to decifer which Orchard I entered
was only becomming a nightly ritual that
seemed endlessly repetitious of the night
before

Granted this was my decision to enter
but somehow between yes, I somehow
should have said no...........

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Andrew Blakemore 02 February 2009

Just beautiful Bonnie, strains of Adam and Eve woven into another masterpiece. I love your poetry. Love, Andrew

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Abha Sharma 20 April 2008

Many a times we tend to do to what our inner conscience disagrees…but the destiny makes us go, we become the puppets…so our NO…becomes YES…a nice interesting composition…

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Dana Vespa 21 February 2008

Amazing poem...well written

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Bonnie Collins

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Middletown New York
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