The Great Divider Poem by Sandra Feldman

The Great Divider

Rating: 5.0


You and I
Could have written,
Such heart throbbing poetry,
Together,
But it was not meant to be,
Too early for you,
Too late for me
Time is the great divider,
Even for those fancy free.

Monday, July 30, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: painful,separation
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 03 August 2018

A poignant write. Yes, time does that to many hearts. But in God's own time someone will come along the way. Beautifully crafted write.10++++

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Susan Williams 31 July 2018

Oh, this poem is full of lonely pain. Must time be a great divider? Soon we will live in eternity where time will only be known as timeless. My dearest Sandra, you deserve a grand love, the grandest love of all! 10++++++++++++++++ and onto my fav list not because it breaks my heart but despite it breaking my heart.... but because it is an excellent poem full of talent

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Bernard F. Asuncion 30 July 2018

Such a well expressed poem, Sandra....10+++++

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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 July 2018

I wonder for the first time I hear a poem of different note from a very optimistic poet! An insightful piece of work! (10)

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