The Hot Pink Shoes Poem by Patti Masterman

The Hot Pink Shoes



I was always late to the banquet,
Or the fabled buffet ran out of food too soon.
The bridesmaid shoes dyed hot pink,
To match the dresses perfectly, pinched my feet;
Mine were three or four sizes too small.
But I had to wear them anyway because time,
You see, was running out; and where else, do you think
You would find that exotic shade of hot pink?

The wedding seemed to go on for hours;
And I had to stand still, in the front of the church, smiling
As the shoes devoured first my feet and then my ankles-
The cramping rose to a crescendo and never became less.

Later, removing the offensive shoes forever,
I knew that I would have no fancy wedding,
With specially dyed shoes, to torture another girl-
Because the clock would be ticking,
And where could you get that exact hue?

They never knew about my secret pain,
And the much-vaunted marriage dissolved all too soon.
But my feet miraculously remained unscarred,
They showed no marks from the crippling effects of the shoes.
It's strange how unbearable pain can leave no outward sign-
Except in memory- where it will always remain
That exquisite color, that is found nowhere else.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hans Vr 07 August 2011

This is another one of your gems. Extremely pleasant to read, good message inside. Well written.

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Jim Troy 06 August 2011

Wow I say to this one. It is a delima in life that so many face in so many ports of call..... Usually formal gatherings. So much discomfort is always present because of so called protocol.... Reflecting back, usually adhering to protocol is a sacrificial lamb ceremony... I can just feel the pain suffered by my friend. How sad............But a beautiful picture you bring in the vision of it all

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Poem Destruction 15 November 2021

Jim what an insightful comment you have contributed to this just... splendid poem. Really MADE MY DAY. I wish you the best and hope that you are doing well old chap

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